The Crack in the Electric Window Critique

Sentence segmentation has been applied well in the excerpt. Some of the commas allow the introduction of additional information into the sentences. All these contribute to the readers’ understanding of the story plot. The sentence that begins with ‘At the most basic level…’ have two commas. This allows for the introduction of a qualifier stating: ‘regardless of the light source’. Acland’s use of the adverbs helps in easy understanding of the intended meaning to the readers. Adverbs also alleviate boredom and plainness of a write-up. In the article, the adverbs helped readers to see beyond the normality of objects and events. The paragraphs are arranged in such a way that it is easy to follow the ideas of the writer. The thoughts are not mixed up or jumbled together as some writers would do. Elsewhere, the article refers to a philosophical dead end to mean a time when philosophy would make no meaning. There article is filled with vocabularies that are well placed to facilitate th...