Personal Statement on Arts examples

I have to make 4 insight question with attractive answers. Each answer must be up to 350 words limit. I want you to revise my draft and make it longer up to almost 350 words. Since the due date is 11/30, I focus on the person who can deal with it quickly.

I need a statement discussing the process, lessons and techniques learned. I have the picture that what i did in the class. "curved" "gray" "eager" are my 3 words. the snake is my work. don't use the word too difficult. coz i am international student.