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Independent Argumentative essay (revision)

----------------Comments----------- Title could be a bit stronger, I think. Also, continue to clarify more language throughout this essay. Introduction does a good job beginning specifically. However, after you provide the research, there is room for a smoother transition into this controversial argument. Thesis statement is an open-ended thesis; remember you need to provide a listing thesis for our class assignments. Your thesis needs to include both your argument/claim and your two or three main reasons you will cover in your essay to back your argument. For revision, focus on CRAFTING A SPECIFIC ARGUMENT. For example, “Robots will never replace humans in many industries because…” You have the makings of a good argument and provide some strong reasons in this essay but right now the essay is structured sort of haphazardly without enough focus or attention to MOVEMENT. The two pargarphs following the introduction are not related to the argument—they seem to be background information. Each of your three sections begins very well—clearly and specifically (list these three reasons in your thesis!). You are also on the right track providing apt research. However, each section is one long paragraph without structural focus. There is far more room for research and discussion of EACH research/evidence provided. Right now each section reads as too cursory to be compelling enough to back this argument. Counterargument should be focused on only one specifically and then move into the one rebuttal. Right now, the counterargument looks longer than some of the actual argument’s sections.
----------------Comments----------- Title could be a bit stronger, I think. Also, continue to clarify more language throughout this essay. Introduction does a good job beginning specifically. However, after you provide the research, there is room for a smoother transition into this controversial argument.
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