commentary paper on pornography and sexual behaviors of young persons

2-3 pages on this article • Hare, K., Gahagan, J., Jackson, L., & Steenbeek, A. (2014). Perspectives on “pornography”: Exploring sexually explicit Internet movies’ influences on Canadian young adults’ holistic sexual behaviour. The Canadian Journal of Human Sexuality, 23(3), 148-158. Attached is the article Below is the scoring sheet to guide you COMMENTARY PAPER SCORING SHEET Organization (0 to 2 points) • Have you an introductory sentence stating clearly what the assignment is about? • Does the paper have a lively introduction that invites further reading? • Does the paper have a definite conclusion that draws the ideas together and leaves the reader satisfied? Development (0 to 6 points) • Are the ideas explored adequately within the limits established by the thesis statement? • Does the paper avoid summary? • Does the paper offer sufficient detail or enough examples drawn from the article being reviewed to clarify major points and make them convincing? • Have you used accurate and effective language in making your ideas and evidence clear? • Is the length of the paper within the required range (2-3 pages)? Mechanics (0 to 2 points) • Does the paper demonstrate control over the essential elements of grammar? • Are the sentences clear and smooth? • Have you avoided major grammatical errors in the paper (such as sentence fragments, comma splices, fused or run-together sentences, subject-verb agreement errors, verb form errors)? • Have you matched the paper format with the instructions for the assignment (double spacing; Times New Roman font 12, and APA format including title page and reference list)?