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You are going to rewrite the first section of the story [from the beginning, to the sentence "It had only seemed to drag on and on'' - about ⅓ of the way down the second page.]
Decide whether you are going to rewrite the section from:
an omniscient point of view (you would reveal what other characters, besides Robert, are feeling and thinking),
an objective point of view (you would tell the story in such a way that the reader could infer what the characters are thinking and feeling but you would NOT state what anyone is thinking and feeling, for example, an objective narrator would NOT write: "Robert Proctor was too wise to slam on the brakes.")
first person point of view (using "I/We"), OR
limited omniscient point of view BUT from the point of view of someone other than Robert.
Rewrite the section being sure to remain true to your chosen Point of View. An example of what this looks like may be found here.
Your rewrite should be about 800 words long.
Paragraph: How do you think your changed point of view affects the emotional impact of the passage? What would be the effect on the reader if the whole story had been written in that point of view? Respond in a well-developed paragraph.
You are going to rewrite the first section of the story [from the beginning, to the sentence "It had only seemed to drag on and on'' - about ⅓ of the way down the second page.