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Hello, I have attached the following the paper it just needs a few adjustments please read below. The paper is well-written and establishes most of the objectives in the prompt. For instance, the majority of the paper covers the political objectives of the Johnson administration in Vietnam but only offers a single paragraph to the discussion on the political objectives of the Nixon administration in Vietnam and how these two compare and contrast.  The Nixon administration deserves far more than a single paragraph of discussion especially for a paper that allowed for discussion on both administrations with a comparison to show how each president’s political objectives were similar, which then followed a discussion on their differences.  This paper did mention the idea of contrast between Johnson’s and Nixon’s political objectives in Vietnam to  show that Johnson gradually escalated the war by moving military forces into the country, and Nixon would gradually remove military forces from Vietnam with his policy of Vietnamization. Next, it is important to point out that the organization of the paper was also an issue. The introduction provides good information on the political objectives in Vietnam, but the thesis statement is lacking attention. The body paragraphs begin strong to support the argument on President Lyndon Johnson’s political objectives in Vietnam, which then transitions nicely into the political objectives of President Richard Nixon to succeed the Johnson administration.  However, the body paragraphs that follow provide further discussion on the Johnson administration and lack an extended argument for the Nixon administration to show a clear comparison of these two leaders and their objectives in the conflict. The paper also lacked a contrasting argument between the two administrations to add to a discussion on the differences between the political objectives of Johnson and Nixon. Also, there is no conclusion in your paper. Please add a conclusion to all of your writings. Finally, the mechanics of the paper were lacking as well. This is to include the use of footnotes in the Chicago style of writing. Footnotes are designed to provide citations for the location of evidence in the paper. These footnotes are numbered individually in sequence and each follows the source materials that are to be cited properly as shown in the Chicago manual written by Turabian or found on the Purdue University page.  Also, the footnotes are separate from the Bibliography page. These are not presented similarly between the citations in the footnotes and the citations on the Bibliography page. Footnotes: Herbert Y. Schandler, America in Vietnam: The War That Couldn’t Be Won (Lanham, MD: Rowman & Littlefield Publishers, 2009), Page Number. If you use the same source in your next footnote use: Ibid., Page Number. Bibliography: Schandler, Herbert Y.  America in Vietnam: The War That Couldn’t Be Won.  Lanham, MD: Rowman & Littlefield Publishers, 2009.  Please email me if you need more examples and help with citations in the Chicago style of writing.  If you make these changes moving forward into your Final Research Paper, this will be certain to help you produce a strong paper for submission on December 15. Thank you for your efforts and submission. Please make all necessary changes and resubmit the paper for regrading.
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