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Proofreading my Essay
The essay is to Write a profile of your oldest living relative. Include: When/where were they born? If they were not born in the Valley, when did they move here, and why? How many siblings do/did they have? What kind of schooling/trining did they have? Was this relative looking for a better life/employment? Where do/did they work? What did they do at their job? What are their favorite activities? What were their biggest accomplishments?
Include anything else about your relative.
I need a good proofreading. this is my instructor note for me
(Saud: you need to work on the beginning - get to the point. You have a good conclusion. Although writing in English is not easy, there are some things in grammar I can overlook. However, you need to proofread before you submit your work. I think you know how to write a complete sentence in English, but your writing must be consistent.
Uncle Ali sounds like a wonderful man, and role model. What would he say about your essay?)
it ok if you add some sentences you feel can help the subject
The essay is to Write a profile of your oldest living relative.