SUBJECT AREA English Language
CREATED ON 13th September 2017
COMPLETED ON 14th September 2017
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narration paper i have paper write i want you to fix it and make it better

Paper 1: Narration For your first paper, you will write a narrative – a story - about an event that has changed you in some way or affected your life. The event could be anything: the birth of a sibling, the death of a loved one, a choice that had significant consequences, etc. Pick a topic that is interesting and important to you. You need to be telling about a specific incident that happened over a brief period of time. For example, the day you graduated from high school would be an acceptable incident to tell a narrative about. Your entire senior year, however, would not. The few days after the birth of a child would be a suitable topic, but the whole pregnancy or the child’s first year would not be. Although a story will not conform strictly to standard essay structure, your narrative essay should still have an introduction, a thesis, a body, and a conclusion. The introduction should catch readers’ attention and set the scene for what is to come. It should tell how you were or what your life was like before the life changing event. The thesis should tell generally what happened and how it changed you. Ex. “Giving birth to my daughter proved to me that even if I am not in control of a situation, I am strong enough to control my attitude.” The body paragraphs should tell the story. Use concrete details that engage the senses. “The room was just light enough for me to discern the outlines of the furniture, which reminded me of hulking black bears hibernating in their cave. A dank, slightly metallic cave smell even permeated the air.” Use dialogue if/when appropriate to add interest. Organize the story logically so that it is easy to follow, and use transitions when appropriate. Keep your tenses consistent. If something happened in the past, write about it in the past tense. If it is happening in the present, write about it in the present tense. In the conclusion, wrap up the story and tell what you or your life is like now after the life changing event. Technical Requirements The final draft of the essay should Have a descriptive title (Not “Paper 1” or “Narrative Paper”) Be double spaced Be at least 800 words long Contain no run-on, comma splice, fragment, or pronoun errors (especially the use of “you!) Be written in clear, readable sentences that employ standard English Contain no spelling errors. Due Dates Different stages of the assignment are due by the beginning of class on the dates listed in My Assignments and on your syllabus. Assignments should be submitted to D2L unless noted below. Plan Must contain 1) a short statement about how your life was before the event you'll discuss, 2) a thesis that tells what happened and how it changed you, 3) an outline of what happened, and 4) a short statement about how you are now. Submit to D2L Rough Draft Submit to D2L In-seat classes (not online!) must bring in 2 hard copies (paper printouts) of your draft for peer editing. Failure to bring in hard copies will result in the deduction of 5 points from the final draft! I am going to require that all students submit their rough drafts to Brainfuse, an online tutoring service. I suggest that you submit your draft to Brainfuse when you submit it to me. (Submission instructions are posted below.) When you turn in your final draft, you will need to attach the tutor’s comments to the end of the paper. Failure to do so will result in the deduction of 5 points from the final draft. Final Draft Submit to D2L
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