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I got this feedback from my teacher that i need to fix my cover letter, if you can please help me edit it! You can make it all up Please see Turnitin feedback. All students are HIGHLY advised to utilize UA writing resources, such as the Think Tank’s Writing Center, in obtaining additional support and feedback in revising these most important career documents. Component Letter of Inquiry/Interest Cover Letter Formatting uses appropriate business letter formatting (0.5 points) uses appropriate business letter formatting (0.5 points) Minus .25 Opening paragraph Strong introduction as to who you are, what your credentials or career interests are, and why you are writing to them (to create what opportunity for yourself?) (1.5 points) Be certain to write a strong ‘hook’ opening paragraph – tell your story, share who you are, and stand out from the crowd! (1.5 points) Minus .5 Second paragraph What skills, knowledge, and attitudes you possess to make a contribution to their organization and/or patient population? In other words, how will you serve them? (1 point) Find a different way to describe your skills, knowledge and attitudes . . . Put your excellent writing skills to the task – mention a slightly different set of knowledge, skills, and attitudes than your Letter of Interest/Inquiry. There can be some overlap, but they need to be different from one another. (1 point) Third paragraph Let the reader know how you will benefit from the opportunity with respect to your educational, professional, and/or personal development – which in turn can be utilized to better serve their organization, or patients, or clients, etc. (1 point) Same content as the Letter of Inquiry/Interest EXCEPT, as above, it needs to be materially different (not a copy/paste job). As in the second paragraph, there can be some overlap. (1 point) Minus .5 Closing Paragraph Short, and to the point. A succinct summary (1-2 sentences) a thank you for their time and consideration (1 point) Similar to but materially different from the Letter of Inquiry/Interest. A succinct summary (1-2 sentences) a thank you for their time and consideration. No copy/paste job here either. (1 point) Overall notes Wasn't attached. Minus 5 Good work, could be improved. See turnitin comments.
I got this feedback from my teacher that i need to fix my cover letter, if you can please help me edit it! You can make it all up Please see Turnitin feedback. All students are HIGHLY advised to utilize UA writing resources, such as the Think Tank’s Writing Center, in obtaining additional support and feedback in revising these most important career documents.
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April 8, 2016
COMPLETED ON
April 9, 2016
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