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Disney WWII propaganda

Textual Analysis of Der Furhers Face a Diney WWII propaganda wanting to say how it had a positive social impact on society. Have done most of the essay here are the teachers comments :There's good info. in your leading sentence; as you revise, work on conciseness and clarity. 2. Your thesis statement has a lot of potential--I see the effort you've put into it. However, there's also a lot going on here! We may not be able to absorb all this info. quickly, so slow it down a bit. What about a 2-part thesis that divides up the information and becomes even more precise? 3. Adjust the framing of topic sentences. You'll notice that some of them are informational in nature. Try to identify the major claim of the paragraph overall (that suppports the thesis) and lead with it in topic sentences. 4. Also, continue to work on close reading, particularly pointing to specific details and showing both their significance and how they support the claim. Let me know as questions arise!
Textual Analysis of Der Furhers Face a Diney WWII propaganda wanting to say how it had a positive social impact on society. Have done most of the essay here are the teachers comments :There's good info. in your leading sentence; as you revise, work on conciseness and clarity. 2. Your thesis statement has a lot of potential--I see the effort you've put into it.
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March 16, 2016
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March 17, 2016
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